Second chances (10 words)

In the mirror
I turn my cheek -
Dormant hope born.

Reviews

[emmajoy]

Brilliantly said, remarkably lucid, a true example of how to ..

ten words..

[Einstein Noodle]

we do all have a better side don't we .. :)) great little quip ...only ten words!!!! i will be checking out my own turn of cheeks in the mirror this morning .. just for the halibut ;)
E.

[SleeplessVolcano]

Thanks E. Speaking to mirrors...rather fantastical, eh? Mmmmm.....wanna experiment with "mirror mirror on the wall" now.....your comments always stir some dormant creativity :)

[Einstein Noodle]

just read it again and am reminded of a very young boy checking for whiskers ... :) mom's eye brow pencil in hand itching to color the thinnest of fuzz

[SleeplessVolcano]

oh is it not intriguing how a different pair of eyes sees more than our own? :D

[Einstein Noodle]

:) ................... yes indeed ... love and peace my friend!