Through the desert sand

I wonder what you are doing
On your side
Of this desert

I'm counting grains of memories
More stubborn than my dreams.

I can see
By your disappearing footsteps
That you are allowing sand
To grow
Underneath your feet again.

Reviews

[Ken Simm.]

An excellent use of metaphor.

[SleeplessVolcano]

Thanks Ken

[APOORVA]

simple and gentle with a good stitching of words

[SleeplessVolcano]

thank you for your kind comment