A new season

I saw my reflection
in your exhaled mist
Where's the connection,
Where our souls twist?

The print of my finger
I felt in your touch
I hope it would linger
For today, and such.

The words I do speak
Was hiding on your tongue
From my heart they'd leak
To where they belong.

Your eyes blink whispers
Hinting at spring
Come take this winter -
Let our love begin.

Reviews

[B]

Stunning..............!!!!!!

[Ken Simm.]

A beautiful and empathic love song.

[Einstein Noodle]

ahhhh new beginnings :) every day! ... i enjoy the overall theme of this poem ...Christmas does mean new beginnings ..as well as New Year's ... i think some of the rhymes could be worked on ..ie. reflection/connection is cheating a little ... and "....and such" and " .... leak" ... seems too colloquial for the wondrous theme of love and connection ... i especially like "The print of my finger" line .. it's so intimate especially in relationship to the touch of another ... a little editing suggestions ;) V3 L1 and 2 ..words were hiding not words was ... the title and closing verse connect the whole poem and wrap it up in a wondrous hopeful way .. eternal optimist that i am ...i appreciate that .. "Let love begin" for sure!!
E.