Send me some sweet words

Come shower me

with your bursts of words

And drench

my sun-scorched soul

I thirst for your moist adjectives

to spice up

my bland heart

Come finish my never-ending story

you started that day

when my off-beat moods

spiraled head-on

into the waiting orbit

of your happy smile.

 

Reviews

[Fatimah Hakami]

You're sweet morning.. And my lovely night..
The sun shine and bright your day..
The moon bright and light my night..
Your sun give you sweet warm happy morning..
My moon give me company in my lonely nights..
I like really what I read..
Am new here but this words..
Make me read it..
Don't ask me why..
Because I really have no clue..
It just come through..

[Nisreen]

I was waiting for that today
But it was a cold morning indeed
I wish he does send me something !!!

[SleeplessVolcano]

Sometimes love's harvest depends on the right seed being sown.....

[Nisreen]

Aha
lol you are doing that thing my dad used to do
Send messages under the table .....
Maybe she placed everything in the right place and placed the correct seed right next to your foot
And sat there waiting

To notice if you noticed
She was silent
You thought she was sad
Maybe she was happy all along
But just wanted to know if you feel happy with her too

Maybe

Maybe not !!

[Einstein Noodle]

it is positively miraculous how one can affect and be effected by another .. and its all about the words .. written or signaled
E.

[SleeplessVolcano]

As long as those words are not lost in translation.....thank you my friend for checking in

[Cryingkate]

Lavender scented words that soothe
Satin, ribbon Bundles I send to you.
A Great green pasture to lie down
Watching the firmament of this earths crown

[SleeplessVolcano]

Those green pastures refreshes the soul....sometimes a little bit of slowing down is required for that cup to overflow again....

[Cryingkate]

Tis' true Friend.. A cup can't spill if it doesn't have time to be filled. Drink. Sip,then Guzzle :-)

[SleeplessVolcano]

Ahhhh....like your point-form instructions....:P