Once upon a color

I took a pink pencil

from your desk

but I struggled

 

I found another

quite like the

December blue of your eyes

but my words dried up too

 

then foliage green

spoke to me

like a remote Amazonian fern

yet to be discovered

 

and suddenly I saw

green shoots mingling

 

with the vine-leaf red

of your lips

and I knew

I’d make them smile one day

Reviews

[Einstein Noodle]

i want to send this to my love ..well done says i! everything works together ..the pic and the color changes by verse really caught my eye ..pleasantly romantic poem that stirred my heart .. nice one sir!
E.

[SleeplessVolcano]

Oh thank you very much! During winter rain and cloudy grays, we need to spice things up a bit, eh?

[Einstein Noodle]

winter?????????????? where are you? China?? :) tho fall is starting to peek a little .. hopefully it is still a ways off

[Ardra]

very nice... like the way you have used the colors ... liked the words you used .. vine-leaf red .. December blue of your eyes :) very colorful presentation.