Her sad blues

She enticed me to indulge

in her full-color thinking

But I overindulged

on icy indigo, and addictive azure

and realized

it's best to get back to my grays -

at least the platinums or silvers

that visit me between the blacks and whites

of this monotonous life

is better than her ice-cold

blues

Reviews

[PhillipCalitz12]

perplexing... after the very open minded review you made on my one piece , i had to come and read a few of your works. this is brilliant. well done

[SleeplessVolcano]

Thank you for your review. I tend to be a bit too perplexing at times....but I guess that can be a good thing too....:)

[WittyWonka]

Something tells me she is still indulging. We all want a little color but sometimes it's best to stick with the grays.

[CherieLamour]

Better to have a little blue than just all grey? So sad sleepless... find your yellow and gold again. I know you have it within you. Great poem and expression of deep inner loss.

[SleeplessVolcano]

Great to see you here again......good friends know where to find each other, right? :)
Thanks for the kind Words....