Out of this world

Her flying saucer
Crash landed
Onto his orbitless heart
Their love,
Bound to be
Out of this world.

Reviews

[RedHairedWarrior]

Love!!! You definitely seem to have a knack for saying a lot with just a few words. :)

[SleeplessVolcano]

Thank you...:).....trying to practice "brevity is the soul of wit".....

[Einstein Noodle]

his orbitless heart ..her crash landing and out of this world ..sounds epic in scope and yet your poem istrimmed to the bone .. i like the enigma of it the most ... well done says i!
E.

[SleeplessVolcano]

Thanks E! ....area 51 love I'd say....;)

[Einstein Noodle]

ahahahaha! yeh! perhaps :))))