Faded Memories

"sometimes that which is torn, can make our souls well worn"

My ripped jeans, ripped heart - 

Traction for your fingertips,

to grab my soul tight.

Reviews

[fattycbreezy52]

the entire idea of equating the feeling with an act of drawing or pulling is just breathtaking.
Honestly! I am glad that you still have a grip upon such short write ups...It has always been a delight to read them:)

[Einstein Noodle]

oh man! that is one exquisite love story ... i don't like it to be "Faded Memories" (faded jeans) its a marvelous love story that should go on and on ;) nice job with so few words .. i am impressed with the depth you show in this poem of love ..nice one! ..tho it does hurt :(
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[Vatsal Rohilla (account..]

That is short and clear-cut. Something new for me- ripped jeans and ripped heart traction for the person's fingertips to grab your soul tight. Nicely penned. Keep writing.