Life without a filter

A moody girl - she,
Drinks life's oceans in one gulp -
Taking too much in.

Author's Note

Captcha - seascape :)

Reviews

[alanwgraham]

I get this! Brief, good.
If you have a look at my poem Manicarus you can see why!
Thanks, Alan

[WittyWonka]

She sounds so familiar. Wonderful short writing which says so much with so little.

[SleeplessVolcano]

Thank you for your comment......

[WittyWonka]

You are welcome.

[An owl on the moon]

You can transform three lines into a whole world, and show us a life that has been pushed too often to the edge. Pure, living art.

[SleeplessVolcano]

Thanks CF.....maybe I should start a Senryu exchange - like what they did with Bitcoin - and trade our senryus "virtually".....are you in? :P

[An owl on the moon]

Why, thank you! That sounds virtually phenomenal. I must read up on my Senryu guidelines; I'm a little rusty. :D

[V]

Really well expressed. As I so often state, write and think: Less is (often) more. You created short but awesome lines.

[SleeplessVolcano]

Thanks Vanessa....took me a few decades to learn that less is more.....:)

[V]

You're welcome. I think it differs from time to time. It's often more but with emphasis on often and not always ;)

[Einstein Noodle]

one of the most appropriate captcha to date! she is a greedy girl eh!? drinks up the oceans and leaves all those sea faring vessels stranded on dry ground .. a tasty little treat your poem is :)
E.

[SleeplessVolcano]

Just for this reason I do not surf or sail online, but rather fly.....:P

Thanks for your encouraging thoughts my friend,,,,,

[Einstein Noodle]

and neither do i sir ... and only fly by flapping ;)

[B]

ehem
i know someone like that lol

[SleeplessVolcano]

Think I'm going to go into the "mental filter" business......I'm sure I will make a killing....;)

[B]

lol ... i have no filters
lol
dont believe in them

[SleeplessVolcano]

Mmm..not believing in filters.....guilty of that I am.....gonna put that into a poem now.....:)

[B]

i guess filters make us fake
life was meant to be taken as is
all of it
to feel everything the way it is
i guess
i could be very wrong