Cry for help 10W

Cry for help 10W

A Poem by SleeplessVolcano
"

Some shoulders are priceless

"
When I say

I'm okay

Please

Ask

For

proof.

© 2016 SleeplessVolcano


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lol ..... i say proof is vital
but i guess if someone knows you well
they will know
without even asking

Posted 8 Years Ago


If you keep saying you are okay one day you will convince yourself too. This can be a good thing if you need to rise to that level but not so good of others think you are more than just okay. Say you are amazing and you might start to see what others already know about you. :-)

Posted 8 Years Ago


For me, the eyes say it all. Nicely done.

Posted 8 Years Ago


SleeplessVolcano

8 Years Ago

Indeed. Sometimes those eyes are hidden.....and one wonders whether they will ever shine their lig.. read more
I always wonder why we can't be honest with friends. You are lucky.

Posted 8 Years Ago


SleeplessVolcano

8 Years Ago

Lucky to have a good friend, yes. Luckier if I listen to good advice given.....:)

Th.. read more
WittyWonka

8 Years Ago

That's true. We can all be a little wiser. You are welcome :)
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Some people need to be asked several times if they're ok until they come up with the truth. Lucky you if you have friends like this.

Posted 8 Years Ago



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Added on February 10, 2016
Last Updated on February 10, 2016
Tags: Okay, coping, confused, faking

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"In the end there doesn't have to be anyone who understands you. There just has to be someone who wants to". Robert Brault Art washes away from the soul the dust of everyday life. ~ Pablo Pica.. more..

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