Sunrise, sunset

Oh what bliss to see both in the same day!

She glowed
Like a single firefly
in pitch black darkness
And kissed earth awake

My heart slowed
Forgetting my cries
Light flooding my abyss
My soul still opaque

Trading my load
My ego capsized
Drawn by this bliss -
A healed heartbreak

The end of light's road
Behind curtains' sky
As she sinks, I wish -
Another day, another take.

Reviews

[Einstein Noodle]

a favorite song of mine in your title ... i feel blissful in the reading ..this morning 4:30 am a crescent moon was low in the eastern sky ..it always amazes me when its like that ... its supposed to be going down in the west ;} ... i think we have 2 moons in these upper mid-western plains :) enjoyed the reading and i like the closing line .. everyday is another take if we are open to it eh!?
E.

[Cryingkate]

of known you saw it too.. Say what star was that hanging below on it's left.
Sure was a pretty sight.

[Einstein Noodle]

it was pretty cloudy ..just the moon did i see :)

[Cryingkate]

Oh Gene !! Tell Norma to wear longer nightgowns. Tell her the moon is blinding your vision ha ha ha

[Cryingkate]

OOPS ! Did I say excuse me... Oh Please excuse the interruption but it's so hard to be silent with my favorite friends gathered :-) Esp. when friends leave the door wide open for a moon spanking :-)

[Einstein Noodle]

star light, star bright may I have first spank tonight ...ahahahahaha! :)

[Cryingkate]

smirk..... giggles.... :-)

[A hare off]

Really, really good poetry. Though the title gives it to us, while reading questions fall into the mind, we slide to different meanings and then a quick glance back at the title brings an ah moment. Great job.

[Dajena]

Ahhh, I get it now. It is the light - she. This reminds me of the musical "Fiddler on the Roof". I like it.

[Cryingkate]

The witnessing of an "Alpha and Omega"
In the Alpha of the morning light, the reporting of a today's to do list,
Then with the Omega discussion of the days work report all in one day.
Tis' Beautiful

[Zoe Taschereau]

I really enjoy this poem. shows your affection very clearly