Broken

Broken

A Poem by SleeplessVolcano



Whispered ambiguities
Resurrecting dormant antiquities
Of realities best left unstirred.

Nudged obsessions
Tickling pending confessions -
Will regrets remain deferred?

Massaged conspicuities
Soften those memories
Of loss, no more heard.






© 2016 SleeplessVolcano


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The heart and mind heavy with so much that will remain unstirred, unsaid. Beautiful piece.

Posted 8 Years Ago


SleeplessVolcano

8 Years Ago

Indeed.....you summed it up perfectly. Too often we cry to have a voice, but it takes more guts to .. read more
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Interesting one. Again, I think your choice of words is on point. I think you are really talented.

Posted 8 Years Ago


I jested this up into a sum, of things undone ;-)
I see this as controlling thoughts that have been tamed into peace.
Quite inspirational !

Posted 8 Years Ago


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Regret...to keep us humble? The Pain of it is a story we replay in our minds. Nicely composed SV :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


Confessions are a monkey off your back but will they become regrets later on to some? Deferred? I haven't heard that word since the poem a dream deferred. I like your style of writing here. Some may be put off by the big words but they somehow seem to be necessary.

Posted 8 Years Ago


SleeplessVolcano

8 Years Ago

Thanks for commenting. I agree that certain words may be off-putting in a poem particularly when th.. read more

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Added on January 1, 2016
Last Updated on January 1, 2016
Tags: Sorrow, pain, confessions, regrets, depression

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"In the end there doesn't have to be anyone who understands you. There just has to be someone who wants to". Robert Brault Art washes away from the soul the dust of everyday life. ~ Pablo Pica.. more..

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