Reborn

I inhaled what

smelled like

the presence

of God

and as it entered

my lungs,

my sin burned away

and I felt like a baby

born, 

five seconds ago.

Reviews

[Nisreen]

Well
this must be quite a stunning experience

[....................]

born anew...we should experience this every time we wake...great piece, SV

[terry smith]

To be free of the shackles that bind us and weigh our souls down....nice poem SV!

[SleeplessVolcano]

Yes, indeed, we all crave that freedom. Thanks for reviewing!

[1VJ]

A spiritually uplifting piece of new beginnings.

[SleeplessVolcano]

Tx Paloma.....I love new beginnings......if only we never get tired of trying!

[AaronFreitas]

That would be the most amazing feeling to experience. To feel complete innocence cleaned from our body and soul would be life changing. Loved your words my friend :)

[SleeplessVolcano]

Tx Aaron......truly amazing feeling indeed! Thanks for your comments!

[kyam]

How uplifting! Beautiful...so calming to the spirit and makes you want to smile and be in that place and in that moment. Very nice, very rewarding......Kyam

[SleeplessVolcano]

Yes! A calm balm for our spirits. I am glad you enjoyed this. :)

[~]

I love the idea of "burning". Just like the lungs burn after a good running time, which clears the head and repels all the anxieties.
A baby indeed - symbol of purity but also a fresh new beginning. :D

[SleeplessVolcano]

Lol@running time.....are you imagining running, or speaking from experience? ;).....I am sure that I walk faster than what you run....;)

But seriously, thank you for your kind comments.....I love new beginnings too....:D

[~]

and maybe you walk faster, but it is not about the speed, but endurance ;)

[Insight "MH"]

I feel you! as a devout person to God Almighty i felt spiritually moved by this.

Thank you.

Insight.

[SleeplessVolcano]

Becoming a new person is a never-ending process, isn't....it .:)......"faith is the substance of things we hope for, the evidence of things unseen"...still need to write a poem about that......

Thank you for your reivew........