Through the sky

He stared at the sky

wishing to see an open door -

at once he was there

his mind catapulted into another dimension

with visions of wonder

too complicated to repeat,

but giving him joy in his heart,

now feeling as big as the ocean.

Light shone all around, not from, or to,

but through everything.

Yesterday, today, and tomorrow

became one

and everything there is to know

became known

in one single thought.

Reviews

[Nisreen]

This soulful mini journey
this glance at the heavens
really opens up the soul

then your arms stretch out
your chest is full of air

and love ;)

[An owl on the moon]

Profound and poignant, drawing us deeper into the wonders of this universe, and of deeper dimensions of our beautiful existence. There is more, so much more. Don't let us forget it, please.

[Einstein Noodle]

complicated simplification ...hmmmmm ... difficult ..... concrete where sand and wind are the only dimensions ... where you "up all night" ? :)
E.
perhaps the poet should have shook the reins ... yaaaaaaaaaahoooooooooo ! ;))
E.

[SleeplessVolcano]

No, I was up all day and finished the last coffee! Hehe......sometimes I do not particularly think much.........I find myself, at the end of a poem.....and not sure how I got there, and suddenly realise it is not half bad.....:)

But bedtime has now been imposed at 10pm.........my body rejoices and the world wide web sighs a sigh of relief.....LOL

Thanks for commenting!

[Einstein Noodle]

its a very meditative poem ... such an experience might be called nirvana or the object of the Tao or "seeing the light" .... or dropping LSD :} ... if i get my afternoon nap of 2-3 hrs. i might make it to 10 PM .... sleep seems my beautiful peace these days ... :)
E.

[Ken Simm.]

Doors in the sky are always worth going through. And this one obviously was.

[SleeplessVolcano]

As long as we can still come back.....:)
Thanks for reading and commenting!

[Insight "MH"]

Deep contemplation is very healthy to the mind of a poet.

Thank you for sharing.

Insight.

[SleeplessVolcano]

Thank you for noticing.....we need to transcend above convention and aim to break boundaries of what is possible....

:)

[Insight "MH"]

Telepathically! ^^

[SleeplessVolcano]

Exactly!.....