Snacking on nostalgia

Snacking on nostalgia

A Poem by SleeplessVolcano
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"Tastes good"

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I chased childhood memories
in the backstreet of my jumbled mind
until, at last, I managed to find
a few heart-warming achievements
but they moontlighted as bereavements
because
learning to tie my shoelaces
learning to play a song on the piano just like the radio
learning to wash my dad's car
learning to mow the lawn in a straight line
learning how to make gun-powder
all meant
that I had to grow up
and I still don't want to.
Now I wear laceless shoes
now I do not want to sound like the radio
now I don't wash my own car
now I wish I had a lawn
at least I did make a lot of gun-powder
and blew up my heart
a few times.

© 2015 SleeplessVolcano


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some things are just not palatable and refuse to go down .. love this poem .. and this line:
"learning how to make gun-powder " is incredibly well placed in my humble opinion .. i grew up in upstate NY and hadnt been back there for some time .. so i went visiting and treated myself to a pair of Ed Hardy sneakers that have no ties .. you made me smile about that .. i love the sneakers ;) and love your poem too .. i am working on something i would like to send you soon if you are interested :)
E.

Posted 9 Years Ago


SleeplessVolcano

9 Years Ago

Thank you for your detailed review :).......anything you are working on I would love to see :)

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Added on April 14, 2015
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Tags: Memories, childhood, nostalgia, remember, fire, burn, alive

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