One step closer

"It is not a sprint, it is a marathon"

My one neighbour is rich

But not blessed

My other neighbour is poor

but blessed

I  tend to drink coffee

in the kitchen of the latter

where my taste-buds are exposed

to what makes my heart and soul fatter -

Brimming over with selfless friendship

And plain homemade cookies

with no almonds, pistachios or choc chips

but each word escaping his humble lips

brings me one step closer

to the golden streets of heaven.

Author's Note

Reviews

[Nisreen]

This notion of being blessed .... just brings everyone together .... just being around thus neighbor maybe the very highlight of your day to be in good company .... everything is sweeter

[earthperceptions]

I've been reading a lot of your work and it all has a lot of heart to it. This piece really captured my attention though. It is a simplistic moment yet powerful in its meaning. Those who have less give more. This appreciation of positive people and friendship is hopeful. THe language capture the idea fantastically.

[FateDictates]

ooh I want a neighbour who will tell me tales and serve me cookies..you created a charming image, and I almost jealous..but pleased you shared this idea.

[SleeplessVolcano]

Thank you very much.....although sadly, the poem was an imaginative one........maybe one day I will find such a neighbour!

[FateDictates]

the idea certainly created a moment of nostalgia for something never experienced..mine all cray cray..

[SleeplessVolcano]

cray cray?

[Jimmy Yetts]

Perceptive and inspiring!
Very much enjoyed the read, S.

[SleeplessVolcano]

Thanks Frankie!