One duck in a row

One duck in a row

A Poem by SleeplessVolcano
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"Rather late than never"

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I slowly loosened

The few wooden pegs

Keeping my heart

Attached to my sleeve

And carefully put it back

Inside of me.

© 2015 SleeplessVolcano


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every word needed and not one more needs to be added .. minimalism to the "T" and just my cup of tea!! ;) so descriptive of a huge healing step .. so very raw as we carry that old heart out of its protection .. such relief that it is put back ... wow! nicely done!
E.

Posted 9 Years Ago


SleeplessVolcano

9 Years Ago

Indeed, relief, but the heart does not always do what we want it to, hey? Thanks your spot-on obser.. read more
Einstein Noodle

9 Years Ago

no ... it doesn't ... i am a firm believer in thoughts come first then feelings .. we loose track of.. read more
SleeplessVolcano

9 Years Ago

Aaahhhh......though it could be the other way around too.....the mind with all its rational thinking.. read more
We have to start somewhere when our hearts have been damaged. All to often those of us who wear our heart's on our sleeves get them bruised. You have created a beautiful and somewhat sad image of having to hide the heart. Great write!

Posted 9 Years Ago


SleeplessVolcano

9 Years Ago

Thanks FT......we all have heart problems....:)

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Added on March 16, 2015
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"In the end there doesn't have to be anyone who understands you. There just has to be someone who wants to". Robert Brault Art washes away from the soul the dust of everyday life. ~ Pablo Pica.. more..

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