Sleeping beauty

Just waiting for her to wake up :)

I feel your breath burn soft sweet lines,
On my now bankrupt brow.
Your body rocks like wind swept chimes,
The best time in life is now.

Your flowing hair just like Rapunzel's,
Hangs over your towering beauty.
My fingers entwined in argan oil sweetness,
To conquer your chamber my duty.

Oh heavenly honey, your presence is peace
To my restless and defunct soul
Forgive me for capturing you into my heart,
This is the truth, for whom the bell tolls.

Reviews

[Nisreen]

I dont think i ever read anything more beautiful

[B]

its when sleep becomes unfair to a partner
waiting for that chance

[Dajena]

Write mores and more please. .....

[jacob erin-cilberto]

love the way you alluded to the different stories and storied characters in this fairy tale of a poem.
you are very clever..."bankrupt brow"--
love that image.

[SleeplessVolcano]

Thanks Jacob......No I am not clever, but bankrupt I am, so life's realities permeate my poetry....:)

[~]

Sigh... How can this be even more ravishingly beautiful than the first one? You are a magician and wooing hearts is your trade. Great ride volcano!!

[SleeplessVolcano]

Oh thank you......do you have any idea whe she will wake up?

[~]

Maybe she has to fall asleep first. :)

[SleeplessVolcano]

My question was not time bound.....more about when she will wake up in my arms.....:)

[~]

Someone that I love very much always tells me: say what you mean then. :) - I'm sure she's anticipating it more than you are. :)