abyss

abyss

A Poem by Himyname'sBob

I can no longer see the entrance
up and down are just relative terms
I can't stop falling.
love is an abyss,
you can only fall deeper

© 2011 Himyname'sBob


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I agree with Hay. you did a really good job on this.

Posted 12 Years Ago


The last line is very true.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Yeah its true but when you reach the bottom you've found the person you'll love forever. Its really good I like it!

Posted 12 Years Ago



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Added on December 14, 2011
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