Do You Care?

Do You Care?

A Poem by Someones_Heartbreak

Do you care that the innocent are dead?
Do you care that most of them got shot in the head?
Children get beaten, they are crying for help.
But it's not like you care you don't know how they felt.
Do you care about teens, and how they try to be cool?
They ruin their lives and drop out of school.
Do you care about feelings?
How boys sit there and laugh?
The girl cries herself to sleep because her heart is torn in half.
People are broke and need money, so they start selling meth.
But the drug deal goes wrong, and they get beaten to death.
Do you care that murders happen everyday?
Do you know how many lives were taken away?
Some people are miserable, and hey get pleasure from a knife.
But they can't take the pain, so they end their whole life.
A drunk driver hit a car and off went the alarm.
The girl's mother was hysterical add her daughter died in her arms.
Do you care about pregnancy?
But the situation gets tougher.
If they are to young, they get an abortion, and the baby hss to suffer.
Do you care about families?
But wait there's more.
Wives have lost husbands because you have sent them to war.
Do you care that kids are born with disabilities?
Do you think it's fair?
They get made fun of everyday, because people don't care.
Did you know that people get away with assult?
I'm sure you did...
And they say it's not your fault?
I have to admit, that I believe this was true, but all of this nonsense we put ourselves through.
So when you get down, just keep your head high.
Look at the people around you, and then look up at the sky.

© 2013 Someones_Heartbreak


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Well, s**t happens.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Someones_Heartbreak

11 Years Ago

Yeaa well people should care
Marie

11 Years Ago

A. I'm a cold heart b***h, as you would see if you read my profile.
B. I only reviewed your po.. read more
Someones_Heartbreak

11 Years Ago

Thats cool idgaf what people think they dont mean jack! The only opinons I care about are mine my mo.. read more
A slap in the face, a punch in the gut, an elbow to the ribs, you name it....seriously powerful stuff *applauds* nicely done

Posted 11 Years Ago


I loved it

and I do care :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


OMG! its truly amazing , and so realistic
its a sad reality !
i liked how you picked your words and different problems and all together made amazing poem , well done :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

good rhythm

Posted 11 Years Ago


wow very emotional, such an amazing expressful write.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Someones_Heartbreak

11 Years Ago

Haha thanks
This is an excellent rhyming poem that covers me facts and feeling about life. Keep up the good work! 95/100

Levi

Posted 11 Years Ago



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