My Future

Oh, how I wish to see the stars so clear
Oh, how I wish to see what you hold dear
And cry I shall when I discover it
Because it's not me, is it?
Let me bask in your embrace
Just one more time 
Because it seems my mentality
Has been misplaced
And upon you knowing this
You drag me without care
To the place of my despair
Really was it necessary
To classify me as a nutcase
And throw me into that fireplace?

Reviews

[LightforChrist]

I really liked this poem, but I think that next time you might want to stick with either an all rhyming format or just not rhyme at all. I loved the rhyme scheme that you started this poem with, but I think that it would have sounded better if you would have kept with it throughout. Great job!