My Star

PERSONAL

There you are my little star shining so bright,

You’re always there to watch over me day and night.

 

You shine the brightest in the sky,

But you’ve been fading and I wondered why.

 

But then I saw her the cloud in my life,

Seeing you and her is as painful as a wound from a knife.

 

Oh my little star I fear that when…

I open and close my eyes I’ll never see you again.

Author's Note

Very Personal
so NO RUDE COMMENTS

Reviews

[TheElfPrincess]

It was really sad, but also very lovely and beautifully written so well done, I enjoyed this very much.

[Kaylor Mason]

This one was pretty moving. I like the last line--it's eloquent

[Leave me alone....]

aww love it. its sad and i would really like to know who this is about.

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

This was a very sad piece. I really could feel all your emotions within the piece. I really thought it was cute ate the same time because it was romantic as well...because you were in love, but he liked another woman. Anyways good piece.

[Dr.Who.LOVER]

I KNOW IT SHOULD BE WHEN I CLOSE AND OPEN MY EYES!!!!!