My hero..

This is personal!

People say everyone has a hero. But thats not

always true. For I always believed he was my 

hero.But now....I am afraid of him. Where is my

hero? Where is the person that is suppose to wipe

away my tears. I feel alone, and isolated. I feel

like a small child with no mother to be held by.

I try to be strong and hide my sorrow, but the 

tears are too strong to hold back. I'm so scared

of so many people. Will anyone ever understand 

me? Will anyone be my savior?

Author's Note

Ignore spelling or grammar! NO RUDE COMMENTS!!! This IS personal!

Reviews

[fireworkcupcake]

This does exactly what it is supposed to, it expresses the feelings of abuse and neglect. I know what that feels like and I feel that you have expressed this in an amazing way. Very well written. You should be proud of your work, it is incredible.

[ashley]

This broke my heart, because it's how I've felt for the past three years. I'm sorry it's real, but you've written it so well. Fantastic job expressing the longing need for love and safety.