Dying...

Dying...

A Poem by Dr.Who.LOVER
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Death.....some say it is the end of our lives. Others say It is a new beginning.  Some are afraid of the thought of death. Others are fascinated by the concept. But whatever the feelings towards death it will happen to all of us. Each hour, each minute, each second that passes by, someone is dying. Possibly in their sleep, possibly by a weapon. But whatever the cause, they are dying. 

Death is something that should not be feared. It is something that should be embraced with open arms. Everyday we face a new challenge against death. For he decides whether it is our time. Whether we live or die is his choice. Our lives rests in the hands of our creator.

Some may know when it is their time. Others may be taken by surprise. However no one knows exactly what is waiting on the other side. Because no one comes back after they leave. And although many wish to know, all we can do is wait. Wait till it is our time. So then, and only then will you see what it is like to die....

© 2010 Dr.Who.LOVER


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nice work

Posted 14 Years Ago


Interesting concepts but I challenge you to consider types of death. And I also challenge you to consider that there was at least one who died and did come back.
Your writing style is wonderful. Straight to the point and that is a rare jewel this day and age. Continue please with your work

Posted 14 Years Ago


Nice, I love it

Posted 14 Years Ago


Good idea and writing but its not exactly a poem. Its more like and expression of thoughts, i think it would be a good addition to something bigger like a story or a book chapter.

Posted 14 Years Ago


it is a nice interperation of the element death.. it is something that everyone goes through but no one knows about. i dont know what to expect after death, but we cant avoid it.. good job.

Posted 14 Years Ago


This was a good set of prose. Which is not true poetry. Yes; I've said it once, I've said it a thousand times; stop confusing prose with poetry. There is a blog feature on this site for the purpose of just expressing ideas. And as for returning from the path of death . . .

There was this one guy a really long time ago . . .

Posted 14 Years Ago


I really like this, but I am not good at waiting for something. :']

Posted 14 Years Ago


Wow... Very intense, great job.

Posted 14 Years Ago


Wow, intense write! I thought that you had some really fascinating points, and that you expressed them in a really simple, yet profound manner. I liked the pace of your story, as it gave me enough time to stop and think, yet at the same time, kept me captivated and wanting to read more. Nice write! :)
~PaperHearts

Posted 14 Years Ago


Dark, i like it....it speaks to my dark side. I've tried rushing death, but every time I've tried I've failed.....I guess you can't rush death...Good write.

Posted 14 Years Ago



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