The pain that we hide

The pain that we hide

A Poem by Dr.Who.LOVER
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This is a poem that came to be while I was doing homework.

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No one can ever see the pain that we hide inside. They do not see the pain that we are forced to swallow every day. Our fear is our own; they don't want to know about us. Why should they be involved? Why should we show them what we must deal with each day of our lives?

We live our whole lives in confusion and fear. And yet they still don't care. Inside we are being torn apart each and every day. And yet they still don't bother with us. Half of us is alive but another half is dead. We all must live with the feeling of disgust to ourselves. And they don't shed a single tear...

The thing that can help, the thing that can heal. Are the flames or a blade and the sting of the steel. The destruction of skin, the shed of blood symbolizes the death of a part of your soul. With each slash, with each burn you lose a part of your soul.

And yet....the pain is still there ......the feeling of being Alone......

© 2011 Dr.Who.LOVER


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i LOVE the line
"The thing htat can help the thing that can heal are the flames or the blade and the sting of the steel."

Posted 13 Years Ago


this is soooooo true for me too. 100

Posted 13 Years Ago


very nice [: i agree that nobody can see the pain we hide inside. and that's why because it's our pain and nobody else's . great write ^_^

Posted 13 Years Ago


This is a really good poem :')

Posted 13 Years Ago


omg this is really good! i can kinda relate but in a way where it makes me cry when i remember that memory. :') its really good!

Posted 13 Years Ago


Wow, this is really nice
it really explains how some people feel...
I enjoyed reading this

Posted 13 Years Ago


I feel the pain my friend.

Posted 13 Years Ago


This is really good. The spew of metaphors are amazing in this piece. I absolutely enjoyed reading this work of yours.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Fantastic :)
I'd call it journal piece but f**k it :)
You're damn good

Fallen



Posted 13 Years Ago


more of a journal piece but that's refreshing. intense subject matter and the fact that you come off so matter of factly with it is sad and great at the same time. you're used to the pain but you express it well. too well, some might say. i'm sure we've all been in that place in one form or another. hopefully, this piece can help someone cope and see light at the end of the tunnel. good work.

Posted 13 Years Ago



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