The pain that we hide

The pain that we hide

A Poem by Dr.Who.LOVER
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This is a poem that came to be while I was doing homework.

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No one can ever see the pain that we hide inside. They do not see the pain that we are forced to swallow every day. Our fear is our own; they don't want to know about us. Why should they be involved? Why should we show them what we must deal with each day of our lives?

We live our whole lives in confusion and fear. And yet they still don't care. Inside we are being torn apart each and every day. And yet they still don't bother with us. Half of us is alive but another half is dead. We all must live with the feeling of disgust to ourselves. And they don't shed a single tear...

The thing that can help, the thing that can heal. Are the flames or a blade and the sting of the steel. The destruction of skin, the shed of blood symbolizes the death of a part of your soul. With each slash, with each burn you lose a part of your soul.

And yet....the pain is still there ......the feeling of being Alone......

© 2011 Dr.Who.LOVER


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Wonderful dark, write. As I felt two things, 1. you're seperated as personaltity in this write far away from your love... and feel not understood, 2. you're writing and describing a schizophrenic double personality. Mmm interesting, as your words flow briliantly across the screen! ;) thank you for this write! really!

Posted 12 Years Ago


I love this poem and can relate to it alot. being alone is sucky. i hope ur not alone now. ciao

Posted 12 Years Ago


Nice write, we all experience this kind of feeling so we can all understand it.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Wow this is a very good write! definitely going into my favorites :D

Posted 12 Years Ago


Good write. The last line was full of emotion.

Posted 13 Years Ago


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i love this write is so good i have felt like this before and still do so i can relate....good job

Posted 13 Years Ago


It's beautiful. I have felt this way.


Posted 13 Years Ago


Interesting.

Posted 13 Years Ago


I love this poem, I totally feel tha same way

Posted 13 Years Ago


I feel this great piece!!! good job!!!!

Posted 13 Years Ago



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