Alone

Okay this is sorta a rap up of my OWN life!

                 I had nobody. I was nobody.
                               When I looked in a mirror I saw eyes full of sadness.
                      I was in a dark place.
                                 Surrounded by hatred, and sadness. For I hated people
                   I hated myself for being this way
                                   People acted like it was my fault when it was not
                  I almost let the hatred consume me

                                 But then.....
            Someone came along and became my friend
             They pulled me out of that dark place
           Now instead of seeing my eyes full of sadness
            I see eyes full of life,happiness and hope
              For once in a long time, I am happy!
         For now I have people in my life that I care about.
                 

              I swear on my soul to protect them!

Author's Note

Enjoy please comment and read some of my other stuff!

Reviews

[NinjaPi]

Very nice poem. Your formating adds alot to the poem. It is really cool that you did not write just a happy poem or just a sad poem but you combined both.

[chaffy]

lala,~ finally a happy one.. glad you are feeling better and stuff.. :)

[deeps]

This is so emotional and so well written.
I enjoyed this write alot.

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

I thought this was very nice. I can understand those feelings. Great job. 100/100