Love

A bunch of things....

I gave you my heart.

I gave you my love.

I gave all I could.

And with just a few simple words  you destroyed everything we had.

You were the last person that I had.

You said it was what you felt was right.

I tried with all my heart to change your mind.

My pain is more than that can be described with any word.

I am empty. A solider left for dead on the battle field.

Looking for a reason to try and keep going.

I can't ask you to come back to me, for I am afraid of you telling  me no.

You softened my heart. All I have to do is forget. But I don't want to.

I wanted to be with you and I still do.

But  my shattered heart is being crushed into the sand below your feet.

I can't understand what happened or why it happened and it makes me angry.

every day I destroy something to release my fruy but to no avail.

I can't rid my self of these emotions.

And I have no where to turn.

For anything I do, don't pitty me.

Just as a door jam in a window its not your place anymore.

 

 

 

 

Reviews

[J.Black]

Wonderful!

[Tai-San]

this is really good.

[GlaSSeS11GeniuS]

I can relate to you pretty much. Love is really like that. I also have the tendecy to break stuff but it isn't about love though. I felt the emotion you poured in your poem. It's amazing how well you could express your feelings clearly when you write. Keep up the good work.

[Meradee]

Tells simply of the heartache we all feel when someone breaks our hearts and crushes it under their heel. I loved the last line, "Just as a door jam in a window, it's not your place anymore" very creative. I like it a lot.
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