Reason

You give me peace.

 

You give me war.

 

You give me something to look forward to.

 

You give me solutions.

 

You give me a reason to live.

 

I give you stress.

 

I give you Irritation.

 

I give you one more thing to worry about.

 

I give you my pain.

 

I give you my heart and hope for the best.

 

I ask you one question " Why do you carry my weight?"

 

And I pray that you don't ask why I can't carry my own.

 

Author's Note

Im not that literate so it would be a good idea to ignore grammar but other than that please feel free to pick at me like an open wound!

Reviews

[Last Lying Look]

This was a really great piece. I liked the flow, the structure, everything.
"I give you my heart and hope for the best.

ask you one question " Why do you carry my weight?"

And I pray that you don't ask why I can't carry my own."

...That part was my favorite. It was really awesome. :D

-Elissa :)

[Bella]

Great poem! It has a great flow. I really liked reading this.

[Wildecat]

This is a wonderful poem, a pleasure to read your poetry.

[FuMiko]

I do love your poetry, Skyler, it's so deep and heartfelt.
Seriously beautiful, man.

Kudos.
-izuMIKO

[Everchanging Disaster]

Wow, i really love this, it's very simplistic but you can tell you put you heart and soul into this. I bet this was a "this is how I feel today and I need to get it out" poem. Really enjoyed this can't wait to see more writing from you!