my crazy messed up world

Been lost isn’t so

Great but getting

Found isn’t either

 

Sometimes you just

Think and think

Until you forget

What you were thinking about.

 

Sometimes I’m lost

And other times

People find me

 

Some try to help

Other just take advantage

 

What should I do?

I don’t know this

Is my crazy messed up world.

Reviews

[Ian Faraway]

This is spot on for a lot of people, especially teenagers who are going through this or people who happen to have a tougher life than others. We all feel abandoned or lost at some point and there's a sort of... bitter sweetness to it. J'adore! -Ian

[Sunny Skye]

thank you for reviewing. Thank you for reading

[Thea Fuentebella]

it's like something a the mad hatter would say. nice :)

[The Watcher]

I think this is a wonderful poem, and I can relate to your confusion. I certainly know what it's like to feel lost. Kudos to you.

[Sarah Jane]

The poem in its own way was a little confusing in the beginning but It makes the poem that much more amazing. I often think too much and by the end of my thought process I have no clue what I've accomplished. Thank you:)

[Coyote Poetry]

Hard to know right from wrong. Sometime must just do it and hope for a good ending. I like the flow of thoughts and the strong ending. Thank you for the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

[Cameron]

I get confused evrywhere I go. Somedays I just plain give up thinking. Great poem I can really relate to it.

[K-mo]

great poem, I feel that way a lot myself. Keep up the good work!