I dont know

I don’t know who

To choose is hard

To pick the one

You love when

You don’t know

 

I’m so lost I

Don’t know where

To look or stare

Where to go or

What to do

 

I ignored you two

For a while now

One tried to get me

Back when I’m

With you but crazy

Things happened

That night and now

I don’t know

Who I want

 

Author's Note

hope you like it. its something that happened to my friend.

Reviews

[Ian Faraway]

Third line in the second stanza should be 'start' instead of 'stare' (I'm assuming since it would make more sense). Other than that I love this point. Torn between two worlds and two loves can be difficult. But one will find their way eventually. J'adore! -Ian

[Sarah Jane]

I like it a lot. The words being written how you wrote them it not only tells of indecision but it shows it, I felt undecided myself. Its always hard to make choices when your in love. Your heart tends to cloud judgement

[Nath]

Well written poem on confusion and indecision, some choices are not made easily and this poem captures the essence of this difficulty. Greatly done.

[Coyote Poetry]

When love make us decide. Hard to know what is right or wrong? I like the desire and the questions in this poem. Thank you for the outstanding poetry.
Coyote