Don't pretend you ever forget 'bout me

You always  ignore me

Never say you don’t love me

 

When I turn around

Your always staring at me

 

Don’t pretend you ever

Forget ‘bout me

 

Cause I’m in your dreams

And everywhere

When your not with

Your stupid friends

 

Don’t pretend you ever

Forget ‘bout me

 

Then you wish you had me

You talk to me

When they are no longer around

 

Don’t tell me to date you

And keep it a secret

 

Because I ALWAYS

Forget ‘bout you

Your no longer important

But I know you’ll remember me

Author's Note

Hope you like it!!!

Reviews

[Ian Faraway]

This seemed kinda self-absorbed. Egotistical almost. Kinda like taunting on both parts. Taunting him because he wants you and you don't care about him. And because he wants it to be a secret.

[freelancejouster]

i feels kind of like lyrics, which is pretty cool.
learn the difference between "your" and "you're"
and some of the stanzas don't make a lot of sense, like the last for example "i always forget 'bout you" ...i always forget about you? why would you have to do that more than once? how would you do that more than once?

[jennifer little]

wonderful poem loved reading it great job keep up the good job
nice nice , hope to see you stop by sometime on my work

[Cameron]

Yes! I love this. The repeating of that line drives home the feeling.

[Jim Parson]

This is a nice piece, well conceived and delivers the message. You might want to be careful of your use of "your" instead of "you're." It's distracting to the reader when the wrong word is used. Outside of that, I liked it very much.

[Coyote Poetry]

I like this poem. Honest and to the point. Sometime better to run then swim with the fool's. Complete poem was very good. I like the strong ending. A excellent poem. Thank you.
Coyote

[sarah]

Wow! yes I love this poem great strength and a wonderful message great work!

[Linear]

Well you sure told him girl, way to go, nice poem too