My shining sun

I'm in love with your

shining sun

My yellow sun

you shine all day and night

in my heart

 

Don't leave me sleeping alone in the

Dark

 

Your my lovely shining sun

Don't let me go until

I die in my shining sun

 

I know your smile,

I know your on fire

because your my burning sun

Please don't die

Please don't let me go

Your my life and soul

You are my

 

Shining sun!

Author's Note

Hope you like it!!!!

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

A kind and beautiful poem of love. Real love make us desire and need someone close to us for the rest of our life. The poem told a story of true and wonderful need. A very good ending to a excellent poem.
Coyote

[Linear]

Whats not to like. It's a lovely poem using the sun as a metaphor is warming. Your desire is evident throughout, well written