Heart made of rock

I hate when people talk

I hate when people think

They just don't know they're jealous

They don't know the real me

 

I might be some demon dreesed up as an inesent girl

 

But when anger comes out

That when people really freak out

Don't expect me to forgive you

When you know that you lied

 

I don't like liers i don't like when someone pretends

 

You were wrong so many times

But you way wrong to mess with me

You never new me

But i always did

Think it over more than once

Because your heart is made of rock

Author's Note

I did get mad this time i just did't know how to write a poem about it. But i think is better than before when i started.

Reviews

[i-love-you-boo♥]

this is good there are some spelling mess ups and a few other things but beside that its really good nice write =)

[freelancejouster]

i like the fire. learn to edit and you'll improve the readers' understanding of this.

[jennifer little]

great job good work keep it up

[Cassiopia Summers]

Very strong. Emotion is a good inspiration. (: Great write.

[Shelly Braen]

Good. Very good. Such fire underneath a cold exterior. You channel it very well and absolutely and most definately present your strength with a rigid backbone. Well done. ^_^

[Coyote Poetry]

A very powerful and direct to the point poem. I agree. Nothing as bad as a liar. Complete poem told a very good story. Thank you.
Coyote

[Marie Harrison]

I've been in this space before but we have no control of what people think of us or think in general. We only have control of ourselves. I think it's natural to want people to like us though. I'm not fond of liars either, they are hard to have relationships with. You have a few typos in this clever poem. But I really enjoyed this poem. Thanks for sharing with us.

[sarah]

wow intense great write!

[Caitlynxoxo]

I always do the same thing; rather than get mad physically, i write down everything i feel. It's a much safer way ;) Anyway, this was a great poem! Your feelings were obvious, and i just hope everything works out. Thanks for sharing

xoxo Caitlyn xoxo

[Linear]

Anger is best written out, some spelling errors (minor) but you got your feelings across very well