Such a Fool

Such a Fool

You’re such a fool

You act like you know me

But you know you don’t

You’re such a fool

You don’t know white is winter

And red is the sun

You’re such a fool

You can’t tie a shoe

You think your better than everybody

You’re stupid you’re dumb

You have no idea what’s going on.

Reviews

[Cassiopia Summers]

Great anger shines through. Great write.

[Shelly Braen]

Such imperious, quiet anger! An elegant frustration! I adore this piece! You are quite the writer. This is simplistic, yet carries the undertone of such complexities making it a satisfying read! I love this! ( By the way, please do tell what they are not understanding. Show yourself for all you are. ) ^_^ Bravo!

[Sunny Skye]

They have no idea of who they are or what is going on around them that's what i menat at the end.

[Linear]

It's true i dont, can you tell me please?

[Marie Harrison]

Such angst and venom in this angry poem. I enjoyed it. Bet it felt great to get this anger out of your mind.

[Sarah Jane]

Oh oh oh, I would love to say this to a few people. Not what I expected and thats good because I was getting tired of the I was a fool not to see it or something kind of poems. It's always nice to see some plain anger illistrated with the power of words.

[Caitlynxoxo]

lol i agree with coyote; obviously someone has pushed you to the point of making this :P it was really good, i liked the repetitive mentioning of "you're such a fool" thanks for sharing!!

xoxo Caitlyn xoxo

[sarah]

oooo compelling

[Coyote Poetry]

Someone got on your bad side. A powerful poem. Direct to the point with anger. A excellent poem. No weaknesses. Just strong points made.
Coyote