Hard Times

It's tough to go through things other people don't understand

Some people don't even believe is true

 

You look bad

You  look sad

 

But you might not know

That they are wrong

You think they're better

But they're not

 

Clear out your thoughts

And feel the happynest inside

You clear out all your thoughts

and you don't feel sad

of knowing what you been through

Knowing that is not really that rough

 

Author's Note

I hope you guys like this piece. I think i might have to edit it but let me know what you think.

Reviews

[Shelly Braen]

Ah, a comforting piece indeed. It is rather to look on the brightside. Deep and hopeful. Very well executed. ^_^

[Marie Harrison]

How refreshing this writing is. You're right we never know what goes on in the lives of others. We never really knows what another's existence is truly like. The older a get the more reluctant I am to judge others. I far too often find myself in the shoes of others that I have judged harshly.

[Linear]

It's not always easy, not always plain sailing, life often throws us a curved ball, but it's how we deal with it that makes us grow into the people we are.

[sarah]

I love the feeling this poem gives great job!

[Sarah Jane]

I like the start how other people dont understand your pain. And in the end, it says to me that even though it seems like a crisis to you, it may not be so just get through it and gethappy :) Very nice

[Coyote Poetry]

I don't know. Each of us can get over sadness and disappointment. Some people are stronger. I like the beginning. Few understand the pain of other till they learn a similar pain. I like the ending. A excellent poem.
Coyote