Don't pretend

Don't pretend

A Poem by Sunny Skye

Don’t Pretend

 

You’re so funny

You’re so smart

Is just so poor

That everything is a lie

 

You’re the coolest but you’re the worst

I don’t like you so don’t come around

Stop acting

Stop pretending

I don’t like hearts that are black

Pretending to be good

© 2010 Sunny Skye


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this deffently is something I relate too good job!

Posted 13 Years Ago


Intriging in the idea that i just read the last two poems that were about not wanting to lose someone, having someone leave you and now about hating those who pretend. I like that your poems are simple and to the point. The only thing I would say is that I would have put "I don't like hearts that are black, pretending to be gold" relating color with color instead of color with a side. I love it though :D

Posted 13 Years Ago



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