Cry

Cry

Cry today

Cry everyday

Cry tonight

 

Not make me stop ever again

 

I don’t get your feelings

I don’t get you

I don’t see the Real you anymore

I can’t believe your not here anymore

Reviews

[Cassiopia Summers]

I like the title. And the poem goes well with it. (: Good job.

[Linear]

Oh dear cry cry cry those tears, then dry those pretty eyes and cry no more, fill your lungs with laughter, for tommorow will bring you joy

[Marie Harrison]

This is a great poem. I agree with Chana, needs a little more work. But it's great.

[Goodbye]

Is sad and expressive, put I'd like to see you stretch yourself more with a little more poetic phrasing - you can do it!

[Caitlynxoxo]

awe this was so sad! :( I like how you expressed the hurt and confusion this person was going through. I'm sure many of us could relate. Thanks for sharing

xoxo Caitlyn xoxo

[sarah]

this is so sad and really touching! I love it

[Mauricio Montoya]

sometimes we need to get those feelings out, it's a good thing.
Thank you for sharing.

[Sarah Jane]

Interesting. I dont get the "Not make me stop ever again" part because of the wording, but I like the last part a lot. As if someone changed drasrically or never did and you just veiled the truth in your mind and they left. Very sad.

[Ashley.M.E]

Can completely understand...