Dont

Don’t

 

 

I search everyday for you

But I can’t find you

Don’t hide

Don’t run away

You’re my favorite

Thing in this place

Don’t make me miserable

Don’t make me cry every day

You’re the sunshine in this world

You’re the thing that lightens up my

Heart and day.

 

Reviews

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YESH!!!!! OH YESH!!!!!! That one thing or that one person that brightens your everydays and makes it sooooo PERFECT! :D I CAN RELATE!!!! :D GREAT POEM ^-^

[Sunny Skye]

Thank you

[Ahmad Cox]

Very beautiful.and heartfelt and enduring poem. I love the honesty and the emotions that are shared in this poem.

[Sunny Skye]

Thank you glad you enjoyed it

[Steven Cash]

You’re the sunshine in this world

You’re the thing that lightens up my

Heart and day.
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That's amazing, and so is the whole poem.

92/100

[Sunny Skye]

Awesome Thanks! :D

[Coyote Poetry]

I like the desire in the poem. When we need something or someone. We won't be content till we are together again. Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote

[Sunny Skye]

Thank you. Glad you like it.

[Marie Harrison]

This was your best, the sincerity and clearness of this piece is amazing.

[Linear]

A simple but very sweet poem, reminds me of someone i once knew, at least i thought i knew her

[Goodbye]

I thought this very touching, but it's a little confusing, as you're saying how he's the sunshine that makes you happy, but to not make you miserable and cry every day?

It could just be me...

[Caitlynxoxo]

"You’re the sunshine in this world"

I'm sure every girl in the world has thought this at some point or another :) Fanastic poem!! Thanks for sharing

xoxo Caitlyn xoxo

[sarah]

I like this a lot it is touching! and sweet!

[Sarah Jane]

I like it. I'm guessing its about love. I've thought around the same idea many many times. It heartbreaking and romantic all in the same breath. It flows, very natural. I like the way you write [: