The end

The End

 

Everybody talks about it

Everyone thinks of what could happen

I think the end would be okay

I think the bad in us would fade away

The end will be no game

The end will be one survival series where you only

Die once and don’t survive for ever

 

What would happen?

What’s goanna happen?

What’s the truth?

Will we ever know it?

Reviews

[Ees]

Nice poem. I don't love the simple four questions of the last stanza, but the first stanza is wonderful. You seem to have a good grasp on what could happen... or at least I think so, because I tend to agree with you.

actually I take that back about the question. I would keep the last two, as they were actually really strong, but get rid of the two happen questions. You don't need them. They just bog down the piece.

great ideas, great poem. Good job.

[Sunny Skye]

Thank you

[Ahmad Cox]

I enjoy the flow and the deeper internal meaning behind this poem. There is a lot of truth in your words. Every body passes eventually. It is an essential part of life. The more we accept it the more we can live without fear and

[Sunny Skye]

Excatly. Thank you.

[Steven Cash]

*gonna happen

Very nice Sunny

[Sunny Skye]

Woops yeah i might have been typing fast so i missed it. Thank you

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I know how the world will end lol it'll begin by the most dramatic happening to ever happen.....I don't have junkfood left in my cupboard...then there will be no hope lol. great poem :D

[Sunny Skye]

LOL! Thank you.

[Amanda J. S.]

Intriguing poem!

[Sunny Skye]

Thank you.

[Coyote Poetry]

Some questions are answers when we reach the end. I like the flow of thoughts and the questions at the end. A excellent poem.
Coyote

[Sunny Skye]

Thank you. This is actually an old piece one of the first i wrote when i first joined WC

[Linear]

The answer is there, all you need to do is ask

[Goodbye]

Good statement of angst about end times.

[Cassiopia Summers]

I agree completely with Caitlynxoxo. Nothing more to say than what she said. She summed it up! Great write.

[Caitlynxoxo]

The end will be one survival series where you only
Die once and don’t survive for ever

We as humans seem to believe that we are indesctructable, especially those far away from danger. your poem was very well written, and hopefully opens up the eyes to those who believe death is but a word in their vocabularly :P

xoxo Caitlyn xoxo