Cry

Cry

 

You hear it when you drink

You hear it when you sleep

You cry for anything just for relieve

You know it hurts

Someone regrets your feelings

You act like it doesn’t hurt but then

You see yourself cry

 

You want to stop you want to grow up

You cry in believe you cry for relieve

Reviews

[Linear]

It is a lovely poem, filled with emotion, yes we all cry sometimes, even though we may hide it from others, we cant hide it from ourselves can we

[Goodbye]

Very sad poem. I saw the believe/relieve thing too, but good poem nonetheless..

[Cassiopia Summers]

Definitely great flow, I noticed the same problem with "relieve" and "believe". It should be "relief" and "belief". Outstanding work though.

[Caitlynxoxo]

I like this :) it was very powerful, and had a nice flow to it! The only mistake i saw was "relieve" in the third line of the first stanza should be "relief" but s'all good!! lol thanks for sharing!

xoxo Caitlyn xoxo

[Sunny Skye]

Please tell me if you like it or not i like to know if people like my work or what wrong with it.