My reflection

My reflection

 

You see your shadow

You see your reflection

You wish you were better

You wish you were kind

You wish you had everything

But you can’t have it

 

You see your shadow

You see your reflection

You wish you could change

You wish you looked better

 

But Everyone is beutiful in their own ways.

Author's Note

How you people like it?

Reviews

[Cassiopia Summers]

This is great, especially because it's true.

[Goodbye]

I get the feeling that you're shaking your finger at me, which turns me off a bit as a reader. Maybe try just a little re-phrasing to get your point across without being accusatory...just my own personal thought - after all, it's your poem...