Tears of Blood

Tears of Blood

 

 

The night falls into darkness

The cries of sadness, scares me into heartbreaks

I cry in pain want it to end

Don’t feel good don’t want to be part of anything

Tears of blood is all you see

Don’t tear up when you feel bad for me

You don’t care neither do I

Tears of blood is what you see

Tears of blood is what you’ll feel in me

 

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Wow. A amazing poem. I like the use of tears of blood. Create thoughts and mystery. You said a lot in so few words. I like the closing line. Made the poem complete. Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote

[Ahmad Cox]

The pain is beautifully expressed.

[Sunny Skye]

Thank you.

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That picture freaked the living organisms out of me hehe O.o Eeek bloody tears! lol But great poem, it was sad but lovely. :)

[Sunny Skye]

LOL! Imagine seeing someone crying blood. Not the best image kind of scary. But thank you for reading and the comment.

[Cerise]

Aww..its soo touching with profound pain...its soo sad...very well expressed..

[Sunny Skye]

Thank you.

[Goodbye]

Very sad, disturbing in the flavor of the pain...

[Cassiopia Summers]

I love it. It's a great piece with great flow.

[Sunny Skye]

Hope you like it.