I was born a vampire and my parents are wolves. Vampires and wolves don't get along. So, what you think happends when your own parents are wolves and they turn against you or maybe they ALREADY WERE!
ENJOY! I've done some editing so it should be much better then the other version. Please give me as much feed back as you can it would really help and i would really appreciate it. Thank you!
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You are a amazing writer. I'm still trying to finish my first book. You have create a interesting story and situation. I like the pace and the character. Your mind is amazing. The story had no weakness. You held my attention to the last words. A excellent story. Thank you.
Coyote
Very epic, and a vry good write. Lots of thought and hard work. I wonder, are you a fan of the Cirque Du Freak books? It subtly reminds me of the series. I read them in junior high, they were a blast. This was a very fun read! ^_^
Wow! What a ride! I think you have a really, really good story here, and I like your character development.
A couple things I would recommend - read it aloud; you'll pick up on a lot of little inconsistencies throughout. I would also make an outline of the events and how they're sequenced, so there's a little more consistency.
But I think you have a great imagination, and with a little more work, this could be a really excellent, flowing read!
I want to read some stories please send me mail about your stories and I will check it out as soon as I receive your message.
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