Lies

You come to me

Lie to my face

Walk away and talk behind my back

 

I ignore you

You wonder why

How stupid of you

How stupid of you

How dumb could you be?

How much time will it take?

To realize what a precious thing you’ve lost

 

Author's Note

Yeah...needs some editing....not my best...:(

Reviews

[Persona]

I'm actually going through something along these lines at the moment - it makes me want more anger from it - perhaps some aggression at why they're back stabbing would really bring out the angst

[Sunny Skye]

Yeah I think so too. I'll fix it when I can. Thank you

[Persona]

Welcome.

[Coyote Poetry]

We do learn we lost a precious gift. Most time too late. I like the direct thoughts and the very good ending. Thank you for sharing the excellent poem.
Coyote

[Sunny Skye]

Thank you for your time

[Revolutionary]

to the point.Nice

[Sunny Skye]

Thank you. Glad you like it. :D

[Ahmad Cox]

I really liked this one. It had an abrasive and honest quality I appreciate.

[Sunny Skye]

Glad you enjoyed it. Thank you

[The_Jabberwock]

such raw emotion. it has promise, but i feel like it's fighting between being a diary and a poem

[Sunny Skye]

I see what you mean. I will try fixing it soon.

[Steven Cash]

Its simple

I liked it

[Sunny Skye]

Thank you. Glad you like it