Mother's love

rough draft

Fifteen when I found out I was pregnant

Sixteen and I’m having this baby

In this hospital bed I hole her

She looks back at me

With those beautiful brown eyes I see her love

I will not give her away

I will keep her and raise her to be my own

 

The guy I’m married to

Her father holds my hand with a smile

He has tears in his eyes and I see the love

 

Twenty-one on my third year of college

I come home in the morning to see

My beautiful six year old daughter

She runs to me and yells “Mommy”

          Who could’ve known I would love her so much

 

Thirty-two  and living with the same guy happily

I see my daughter graduate with no mistakes

High honors and six medals

All A’s and twenty colleges pleading for her

Five scholarship offers already taken

 

Happily I cry and I’m happy

I’ve learned how it feels

To be a mother

There is no love more powerful

Then a mother’s love.

Author's Note

I'm still working on this but if you have any suggestions i would be happy to hear them. And no i am not a mother i am only 14 and if i was i would die lol but enjoy

Reviews

[That_Girl]

I LOVE this. I in no way condone teenagers getting pregnant because they just aren't ready. However, that does NOT mean they are trash or completely incompetent. Many teen parents raise their kids correctly and there aren't any huge issues. Great poem.

[Sunny Skye]

Thank you glad you enjoyed it. I agree with you do i don't condone teenagers getting pregnant either but their is always a couple of them that become good parents.

[Coyote Poetry]

A very good story in the poem. Age mean nothing when we are led by love. Real love will victor over hard days and time. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Sunny Skye]

Thank you for reading & reviewing. Very much appreciated. :D

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A Mama cat and a kitty's love! :D THE BEST LVOE EVER!!!! Well for most people. Not everyone shares that same relationship : or it could be one sided which is just as worse but still....i love it!

[Sunny Skye]

Thank you. Glad you enjoyed it

[Ahmad Cox]

Very empathetic and powerful poem. You describe this story and the love she begins to feel for her life and her child very well

[Sunny Skye]

Well thank you

[Sirius King]

this is great...stories that start off like this, mostly have a tragic ending.This was a breath of fresh air :-)

good write!

[Sunny Skye]

Thank you. Glad you liked it.

[Sirius King]

ur welcome :-)

[Steven Cash]

Wowwwzers

This is Epic

100/100

[Sunny Skye]

Aww thanks. Glad you enjoyed it. :D

[Steven Cash]

np