I'm sorry

I’m sorry

You’re still in my mind,

The way you lingered after the accident

I couldn’t stand seeing you in that hospital bed

I cried for hours, you didn’t realize it

You just laid there staring at the roof

I just want to say

I’m sorry

I’m sorry I hurt you in so many ways

I’m sorry am bad

I’m sorry you’re in that hospital bed

It should’ve been me,

You were perfect and I destroyed you

You were every girls dream

And I destroyed you

I’m sorry

I’m sorry you’re hurt

I’m sorry I didn’t care all those times you stared

I’m sorry that now I’m standing here

Looking at your corpse

When it should have been mine.

Author's Note

Kind of sad huh

Reviews

[Ahmad Cox]

Very heartbreaking and emotional poem. It can be hard to say what we need to say often until it is too late. Thank you for sharing such a powerful and honest piece.

[Sunny Skye]

Yes it is. Thank you

[Ees]

Yes, that's a sad poem.
It is often to late to say and do the things that we meant to. I think you did a very good job of depicting that in this poem.

[Sunny Skye]

Thank you

[Coyote Poetry]

A very sad tale in the poem. Death would leave a great sadness. Good description leading to a bad ending. Thank you for a excellent poem.
Coyote

[J. Viands]

Powerful stuff

[Sunny Skye]

Thank you

[_]

-_- Just reminds me of a friend of mine, you described the feeling and emotion of the situation greatly. Sad poem but very nice. :D

[Sunny Skye]

Thank you

[Steven Cash]

wow... is this a true story?

[Sunny Skye]

In some parts yes