She's Gone

I stopped pretending to be someone

I knew I wasn’t

That girl is gone

And so are you

I left you just like you left me

Now I’m the real me

People wanted to get me

As soon as I left you

Or you left me

But I said no

To all twenty

I’m who I want to be

And I will not change or pretend

For you someone who didn’t care

I will do what’s best for me

I used to say will always be together

And I will always love you

Even if we were never together

But that is all gone now

I feel nothing for you

And you can buy me a dozen roses

A teddy bear the size of the world

Or chocolates from the sky

And will never get back together

Will never be what we used to be

You were just someone who

I used to love

Now you are no one

I am who I want to be

The one you knew

Is gone and I don’t have to pretend

To please you

I’ve never been happier

But it’s a shame people say

You lost the best girl

Anyone could’ve had

Now she’s gone and she’s a new girl

She’s happier then she used to be

When she was with you.

Author's Note

Enjoy!

Reviews

[James William Dyer]

Your emotions are laid out very well, and I like the use of repetition in places. What I would suggest is less telling and more showing through descriptive images, but it sounds like you have your meter down nicely without having to resort to rhyme schemes. Nice.

[Sunny Skye]

Thank you for the feedback i appreciate it

[Coyote Poetry]

I like the flow of thoughts in the poem. A emotional ride to a good ending. Hard to make all people happy. Sometime good to let go and hope for a better opportunity. Thank you for sharing the excellent poem.
Coyote

[Sunny Skye]

Thank you, glad you liked it

[Steven]

Ah, what a trick! To create yourself, and then stand by your creation. Nice write.

[Sunny Skye]

Thank you

[Steven Cash]

fairly long but it wasn't a bad kinda long

real good

[Sunny Skye]

Thank you

[i-love-you-boo♥]

allot of emotions flows very well good write

[Sunny Skye]

Thank you

[Sirius King]

a very relate-able poem, i like it

[Sunny Skye]

Thanks for the comment and glad you enjoyed it

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OH! Love the last line, ^-^ I LOVE YOUR POEM! Sure it was little hard to read due to font but still though, so franfriggintastic! I LOVED IT!

[Sunny Skye]

Thank you and sorry about the font but glad you enjoyed it

[Amanda]

I really like this, great job :)

[Sunny Skye]

Thank you. Glad you enjoyed it