Last Goodbyes

My love,

 

I do not mourn those

who kill or hurt, Those

who betryed and ripped me apart.

I wish them well but only

They can fix the past.

 

                       These are my last goodbyes.

Reviews

[Amanda]

I agree with Serenus Raymone, great job

[Sunny Skye]

Thanks for the comment. Hope you enjoyed it

[EternityWolf101]

We all make mistakes in our past, even if we don't see them as mistakes.
A strong poem. I like it.

[Sunny Skye]

Glad you enjoyed it thank you for the comment

[Sirius King]

strong, short and to the point, i like this

[Sunny Skye]

Thanks and glad you liked it

[Poetic Beauty]

Short and strong. This is a great piece.

[Tasha]

This was short yet powerful. Your words are true.

[Sunny Skye]

Thank you

[Tasha]

You're welcome

[Coyote Poetry]

The past can be fixed. We must learn to live with the pain and mistakes. A powerful poem. Create many thoughts to ponder. Thank you for the outstanding poem.
Coyote