Dilapidated

Enough said

Fall at your own feet
as subsided as you wanted to push me
Choke on your breath as mine was to be taken

You cannot control Me

Fall at your own feet
live as obscure as you tried to hold me
Tie your arms around the blocking concepts, blind and forsaken

You cannot hide Me

Fall at your own feet
as undeserving as you saw me
Stomp self to the ground, swallow your own bitter token

You cannot stop Me

Fall at your own feet
eat your greed and resentfulness
Rip it apart, bleed it; Live it - Know you're broken

You cannot keep Me

So, Suffocate on your own End

[lose it, go away]

Nothing between us is left to mend

[leave it, die away]

Temple Dilapidated,
Learn Actions Consequence Trend
 

Fall from Tall;
Crawl to Small,
my 'Friend'

Skye

Reviews

[Dani California]

I agree with Armada, this is different for you. Harsh. We all take what we want from what we read however, and I didn't read this as a person that you were addressing, but more a negative energy -- fear perhaps -- or the sort -- of whichever would be applicable. So in a sense, it's speaking to self. Negative self. Positive taking the lead -- taking control. That's just what I took from this -- and it worked well for me! Outstanding as always. :)

[Touché Armada]

Not so used to reading such a retort on your page, though I have to say, you do it just as well as your gentler far reaching words of love. Actions consequences, yes, be damned yes that is so true isn't it. Good thing the pens no bullet for that old friend I'm thinking. Smiles.